Absence
>> Saturday, February 26, 2005
A structure tore down
The rubble, the ruins,the void..
Absence
The winter sneaked in
faded colors, fallen leaves,naked branches..
Absence
I forgot to pray
The dusty tabletop,the parched lamp,the dried flowers..
Absence
A river dried
the bed,the stones, the dead fish..
Absence
A half written verse
random words,meaningless sentences,spilled ink ..
Absence
He never came ..
Absence
3 comments:
its disturbingly beautiful, haunting, poetical, deep!
sometimes its not in the presence of things or people that we realize their real importance in our lives, but mostly absence reveals it all!
you cannot see me,
.
.
.
but you know,
.
.
.
i am there...
I love this poem. I think it would be more effective if you only repeat the word "Absence" and the beginning and the end. Just a suggestion :)
adrian
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